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-A new version [2.4.55](https://github.com/MISP/MISP/tree/v2.4.55) of MISP including bug fixes and improvements.
+A new version of MISP [2.4.55](https://github.com/MISP/MISP/tree/v2.4.55) has just been released, including bug fixes and improvements.
 
-This release is a transient release before the galaxy release (TTP-like support) that will be the next release.
+This release is a transient release before the galaxy release (TTP-like support) coming up soon.
 
-The release includes various improvements like:
+The release includes various improvements such as:
 
-- Sighting is now a default enabled feature. Multiple UI improvements to the sighting done.
-- The NIDS API export has been improved allowing JSON/XML payloads with filter options. The attribute type can now be also filtered.
+- Sightings are now a default enabled feature. Multiple UI improvements added to the sighting system.
+- The NIDS API export has been improved allowing the passing of filter parameters via JSON/XML payloads. The attribute type can now be also filtered on.
 - Bug fixes in the add user API.
-- Various bug fixes in the NIDS export including the missing domain|ip attribute type.
+- Various bug fixes in the NIDS export including the addition of the missing domain|ip attribute type.
 - Multiple bug fixes.
 
 We thank all contributors.
 
-The full [change log is available](http://www.misp-project.org/Changelog.txt) at the following location:
+The full change log is available [here](http://www.misp-project.org/Changelog.txt).
 
 Don't hesitate to [open an issue](https://github.com/MISP/MISP/issues) if you have any feedback, found a bug or want to propose new features.