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misp-summit/2019/summary/content.tex

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         \frametitle{2019 - A successful year for the MISP project}
 \begin{itemize}
         \item {\bf Improving and extending MISP project and information sharing practices} at a faster rate than expected
-        \item Increasing reach out to collect ideas and inspirations from EU CSIRTs, the private sector and security professionals while doing trainings/workshops (thanks to the CEF funding)
+        \item Increasing the reach-out to collect ideas and inspirations from EU CSIRTs, the private sector and security professionals whilst doing trainings/workshops (thanks to the CEF funding)
         \item Integrate MISP at a rapid rate with {\bf other standards} (such as MITRE ATT\&CK sighting, STIX 2, GoAML and many others)
         \item Increased pan-European collaboration and information exchanged compared to 2018\footnote{https://www.x-isac.org/publication.html}
-        \item Reaching the {\bf establishment of an European standard\footnote{\url{https://www.misp-standard.org/}} and open source toolset for threat intelligence and information sharing}
+        \item Reaching the {\bf establishment of a European standard\footnote{\url{https://www.misp-standard.org/}} and open source toolset for threat intelligence and information sharing}
 \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
 
 \begin{frame}
         \frametitle{Major outcomes in 2019}
 \begin{itemize}
-        \item 18 releases of the MISP core software which include more than 10 major new features. Attracting a large group of new users and contributors.
+        \item 18 releases of the MISP core software which included more than 10 major new features. Attracting a large group of new users and contributors.
 \end{itemize}
         \includegraphics[scale=0.18]{cfd.png}
         \includegraphics[scale=0.18]{objects-cfd.png}
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 \end{frame}
 
 \begin{frame}
-        \frametitle{Major outcomes in 2019}
+        \frametitle{Major outcomes of 2019}
         \begin{itemize}
-                \item Improved external tools were created during 2019 such as {\bf misp-dashboard} (4 releases) - a new release is foreseen in the next weeks
+                \item Improvements to external tools were created during 2019, such as those to the {\bf misp-dashboard} (4 releases) - with a new release being foreseen within the next weeks
-                \item The decaying model for indicators described as a academic paper in 2018 is now part of the core MISP software\footnote{\url{https://www.misp-project.org/2019/09/12/Decaying-Of-Indicators.html}}
+                \item The decaying model for indicators described as an academic paper in 2018 is now part of the core MISP software\footnote{\url{https://www.misp-project.org/2019/09/12/Decaying-Of-Indicators.html}}
-                \item {\bf All MISP training materials are released as open content}\footnote{\url{https://github.com/MISP/misp-training}} and contain more than 36 hours of training (e.g. MISP usage, administration, OSINT analysis and collection,  building sharing communities)
+                \item {\bf All MISP training materials are released as open content}\footnote{\url{https://github.com/MISP/misp-training}} and contain more than 36 hours of training materials (e.g. MISP usage, administration, OSINT analysis and collection,  building sharing communities)
                         \begin{itemize}
                                 \item Source code is available and translation(s)/contribution(s) are welcome
                         \end{itemize}
@@ -45,9 +45,9 @@
 \begin{frame}
         \frametitle{MISP object templates}
         \begin{itemize}
-                \item From 89 (in 2018) to 147 (in 2019) object templates were added from many external contributors
+                \item The number of object templates rose from 89 (in 2018) to 147 (in 2019), thanks in a large part to the diligent work of many external contributors
-                \item Object templates include updated {\bf telecom objects} (such as SS7, GTP, Diameter or IMSI-catcher output), {\bf cyber security objects}, {\bf security objects} (such as vehicule, interpol-notice)
+                \item Object templates added include {\bf telecom objects} (such as SS7, GTP, Diameter or IMSI-catcher output), {\bf cyber security objects}, {\bf security objects} (such as vehicule, interpol-notice)
-                \item Objects are more and more used in different sharing communities and take over simple attributes in MISP to offer better contextualisation
+                \item Objects are more and more used in different sharing communities and have overtaken simple attributes in MISP as the go-to data structure, offering better contextualisation for the data shared
         \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
                 \item 2019 was a busy and successful year for the MISP project
                 \item The 2-year CEF grant was a bootstrap to improve MISP to its next level
                 \item New partnerships and projects are ongoing in 2020-2021 (such as the CEF VARIoT project or H2020 Enforce)
-                \item As the MISP project becomes larger, we improve the structure of the project (misp-standard.org is the first step)
+                \item As the MISP project becomes larger, we are improving the structure of the project (misp-standard.org is the first step)
         \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}